Tuesday, 26 February 2013

First 55!

Akash stood patiently and vigilantly with his weapon clutched in his hand firmly.

These cold-blooded criminals have troubled people for years and it was high time they paid for it.

Suddenly one criminal came zooming towards him.

He slashed his weapon fiercely in the air, but in vain.

Mosquitos are real intelligent these days. 

25 comments:

  1. uh oh.. this was super.. i was thinking of writing a 55er on these cold blooded murderers.. and you jus did.. and of course very nicely told.. keep it up. i suddenly found the urge to write some flash fictions. uno, its kinda fun.. ;-)

    neengalum kalakureenga boss :D

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  2. I was inspired to write this by you!! :)

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    1. *lifting my collars.. so rat.. you too become an inspiration to someone, huh?? ;-) not bad..*

      jus kidding... that was really nice of you to say such thing :-)

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  3. Haha :D
    You are prosecuted under the charge of 'Attempt to murder'. :D
    Bang on 55!

    Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

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  4. Awesome! Enjoyed it like hell:)

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  5. Oh ! Haha superbly done. Wonder being your first one, the details were very fine. Keep up the good work. It's always a delight to visit your blog !!

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    1. Thank you Tanya...getting a comment from you lights me up! :)

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  6. Hi Akash,

    HAHA, that was a good one. Didn't look as if you were doing this for the first time. Executed it nicely :) :)

    Coincidentally, I have tried something on similar lines, though it is of a shorter word limit :) Do check it out :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog

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  7. Loved the twist in the end ! nicely crafted akash :) keep churning out 55 fiction :)

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    1. Thank you Maliny! Will keep churning if I get ideas :)

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  8. Hey Akaash,...this was awesome..really doesn't seem you are attempting fast fiction for the first time...

    Great work, keep it up!!

    Himani

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